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Which do you think is the most overused fiction genre? 

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Journal Entry: Sat Apr 14, 2012, 10:58 AM


Tagged by =SevSinner.

1. You must post the rules.
2. Each person must post five things about themselves in their journal.
3. Answer the questions the tagger set for you in their post.
4. Create eleven new questions for the people you tag to answer.
5. Choose eleven shitload of people to tag and post their icons/devnames on your journal.
6. Go to their page and tell them you have tagged them. I like Sev's idea. Fucking annoying to go to your page and find someone's tagged you in some shitty meme.
7. No stuff like "you're tagged if you're reading this".
8. No tag-backs.

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FIVE THINGS:
• I lie. Everything after this admission is thusly questionable, including this statement.
• I was born a well-off aryan child. Then my eyes turned green and my hair went brown. It's a trait in my family - we're all dark-haired in adulthood, but we pop out as blue-eyed blondies.
• I think. I like to think. It's something I've been doing for the longest time.
• I do not get energized by any particular type of music, but certain genres can really adversely affect me. I listen to music while writing because it's pleasant. For instance: I'm listening to a Spotify playlist right now that includes Grendel's "Shortwired" as well as And One's "Dancing in the Factory".
• I have been known to flip my tits over book mistreatment. Save the Paperbacks!

QUESTIONS:

1 - What's your favourite season of the year and why?
Winter. Oh, winter. I can get away with dressing like a 19th century noble faggot.

2 - The first thing you remember from the internet when you were using it the very first time (and I assume you've been very very young when first using it, too)?
I must have been, like, 4 or 5. I distinctly remember mistyping the address I'd heard for Cheat Code Central (was wanting to find some way to get around playing fair in Ape Escape, I think) and ended up with a porn site. "Shield your eyes!"

3 - You have to get rid of one of your body parts, which one?
My appendix. Ha!

4 - Your favourite colour and your association with it?
I look handsome in white, I guess.

5 - Where do you see yourself in one year?
In a sunny little park writing happy little stories about happy little people.

6 -You are writing a book, what is the book about and what is its title?
Space Man. It's about a man. And he's in space.
It'll be a hit, I promise you, and then there'll be a franchise launched by it with games and high-budget/low-success movies and then people will forget there was ever a book. Then I'll weep, for I'll be making more off of my holding on the franchise than I will be off of my writing.

7 - Deadly sins - which one are you?


8 - If you could see everything from someone else's view/thru their eyes for one day, who is it?
Fuck, don't ask me that. Other people shit, you know, I don't want to think about that.
But seriously, I don't want to see things from the perspective of someone important. I guess I'd probably look at the world through this guy's eyes. How fucking pathetic do you have to be to get fondled like that and not get the hint?

9 - If you could move, where would you live now? (And it can't be your current country)
South Korea? Sounds nice. Crazy cousin next door, but nice. My kids wouldn't really be deprived of a good education, either, I guess. Oh, who am I kidding, I'd be a jackass and move to Germany and deal with their funky laws.

10 - The meaning of life is .... ?
Myself, of course. The individual is all we live for.
Oh shit, I answered a question seriously. Uhhhh, fuck, um.


11 - You get a kid, is it a boy or a girl?
It'll be a girl. And then I'll raise that little girl like a fucking MAN, and then she'll have emotional scars from her childhood because she was manlier than the men and the women were fucking pathetic.

Alright, here comes the profound, deep, introspective shit now. These fucking questions, man, they're like what some dumb annoying teenager would ask you for an assignment.

QUESTIONS FOR THE TAGGED PEOPLE:
• 1. What is one word you'd use to describe yourself?
• 2. Are you happy with your lifestyle?
• 3. Any place you'd vacation at?
• 4. If you could do away with one celebrity without repercussions, which one would it be?
• 5. Do you procrastinate usually?
• 6. Independent or famous? (hipster question, I know)
• 7. Is the old better than the new?
• 8. Which do you prefer: songs, paintings, or books?
• 9. What is one flaw you would change about yourself?
• 10. What drove you to do what you do?
• 11. Anything you've ever really regretted?


THE PEOPLE I TAG:

I LIED! I'M TAGGING ~nobody!
... Oh shit, that's actually a person. Well fuck them.

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So, dick move not posting anything for months and then popping up out of nowhere and doing this, but I want everyone to know I'm among the living here still. I've dropped a dozen deadlines already, but shit will get done.

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Reading Boone Quest is a good way to spend the first hour of my birthday, I guess.
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But the fat yellow man brings such a pleasentness to life!
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For that we must turn to the collective works of Homer.
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Why GW canon is the way it is, from Aaron Dembski-Bowden's pen, no less! [link]

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HI! Along time ago I said I had something I wanted to show and never did, well here is the rough of it, which is missing a of important things but it is something.

One of Steven's wh40k original characters

Project Machina Psykana

A Rune Priest of the Adeptus Mechanicus cult, one of the few in which Ingenuity and originality were acceptable traits, pondered upon the subject of psykers.
Psykers were , as the Imperium taught, beings more spirit than flesh and were already somewhat divorced from there bodies. These beings, these psychic individuals, were forced by there very nature to be immersed in spiritual matters.
The mechanics cult had no psykers in its ranks. The Rune Priest thought about this.
The Rune Priest gathered three of his colleges; an Engineseer, a Generator, and another of a scholarly rank and disposition with in the mechanical priesthood of Mars. Once the were gathered they conversed and used the Rune Priest thoughts as the main topic and as a prompt for further yet related ideas.
After weeks of repeated and long discussion a decision was made. The four priest of the machine spirit had convinced themselves that a psychic tech-priest would be able to come closer to the machine spirits and their father, the machine god than any other member of the priest hood of mars.
The priests presented their thoughts to their superiors and requested to comense a project to make this a reality. They succeeded in gaining permission to do go forth and comense with their plans and designs.
The named their plan Project Machina Psykana. The tech-priest were given many resources; teams of servitors, raw materials, a multitude of tools and machines and freedom of location, all as long as they followed certain rules.
An Imperial Psyker of a scholary rank and profession with knowledge and skill in the fields biology, technology, engineering, and the arcanum was donated to the project to be a source of genetic matieral and the small amount of tissue need for the project as well as act as a consultant and member of the main team along with the priest. In a sense she would be the projects mother. This Psyker brought subordinates of here own to the project, though fewer in number than that of the tech-priests.
The priest had been granted permission and considerable resource for the project, yet they were fearfull that it would be taken from them by their superiors. This is when the imperial Psyker gave the priest one of the first and most important bits of advice to the tech-priest. She noted that they had been given freedom of choice of location and suggested that they preform their project upon a space vessel that the mechanics cult did not own. To this the priest asked " how shall we procure a vessel that is not donated to us by the cult if the Omnissiah?". To this she respond by revealing that she was the daughter of a rouge trader, a member of the errant mobility of the Imperium. Then the tech- priest asked how they would avoid pursuit by the cult. To this she turned to one of her subordinates and toke scroll from him and showed to the priest four and spoke " do to the shere size of the Imperium, the bureucracy is often over worked and sometimes currupted, and thus their are unfortunate results, one of these we can take advantage of. Many planets and regions with in the Imperium have been forgtten and need to be " rediscovered" by a certain rouge trader," " your father" the Rune Priest spoke " Yes," spoke the psyker " my father would profit greatly from such a exploration in more ways than one,and we could plot a corse that could take years if not decades to comeplete, and should that prove to long my father owns a small fleet, I'm sure that he would allow us to use one if needed". After this the priest processed this information for some time before agree with her.
The priest in formed their superiors that the project would be upon a vessel and rather haistily left to board it.
The vessel was in actuality a massive remodled, retrofited, and jury rigged space hulk; a mass of lost ships that had collided together and merged by several event and factors , such as heat mealting the hulls together or garvity generators holding ships together, or bizzar decivice merging them together in stranger ways than the warp ever could.
The pskers father and rouge trader who owned this ship was wealthy man of the millitary, the nobility, and a former inquisitor(I have no idea how one gains retirement from the orders of the holy inquisition, but he did), and his ship was made to reflect that.
The ship was heavily fortified within and without against assaults from the forces of the millitary, chaos worshipers, hostile xenos, and the horrific dangers of the warp. The ship was maned by a contingent or regiment of the Imperial Guard that were loyal to the Rouge Trader.
Inside the ship were a number if facilities that made the ship mostly self sustaining and indepndet that could only exist in a ship of such grand size.
There was a hydropronics system that supported various forms of plant life that were used for various functions and necessities. The most obvious necessities are food and breathable air, and the plants provided the bulk of the food and some of the air, the rest being produced or recycled by machines or purchased from else where. Most of the plants were generically engineered for the for the express purpose of being processed int rations and were not palatable until such time.a. A few bore sweet fruits that were, but for a few occasions such as surpluses celebrations and guest, reserved for the noble rouge trader who owned the vessal. A few more were products of pharmisutical agriculture, plants breed and engineered for medical purposes.
Another facility was one of vats and cultures on which flesh and organs were grown for medical purposes as well as the purpose of consumtion. Needless to say that not all the flesh and organs were not human.
There was a manufacure and fabrication wing in which pre-existing weapons, armor, tools, and other forms of equipment were repaired and new ones were made.
There was a medical wing as well as library and otherthings(not going to talk about the gacozi).
This was the base of operations for Project Machina Psykana and the home of the child it would produce for the first fourteen years of his life.
The genetic material of the imperial psyker was combined with an artificically sequenced genome written by the Generator using the d.n.a. of the rune priest as a template. The child was designed to fulfill many functions of the mechnicus as well as have an appearancr that would command repect from the Imperium of Man when he was older . They would worry about commanding the respect of the mechanicus after he was made a tech-priest.
Project Machina Psykana was born ( if you haven't seen all the he's that your fault) a boy with dark hair, green eyes, and perpetually tanned skin. The boy was not given a name as Machina seemed a good name for a tech-piest.
Upon the ship the the boy was educated and trained and tutored upon the ship, though in not quite a traditional manner. The four tech-priests taught him through neural-interface and trained him through practice. His Psyker mother instructed him telepathically and trained him in psychic techniques and minor powers. His grandfather, the rouge trader, had him trained by a number of his subordinates in a verity of things from trades to combat. Although he was a good student, he wasn't a great one, he had his failings. And fights . One more thing that he learned that wasn't taught to him was that skills would make him useful and needed his nature as a vat breed void born pysker trained and altered by the mechanicus would mean that he would never truly be socially accepted.
An other unusual characteristic would be the way he perceived things. It was not unusual for psykers to experience extra peripheral senses, though what he experienced was not documented before. What Machina percieved was psychic synesthesia, his psychic sense would send signals down a second neural pathway resulting in perceiving information with ensues other than the ones that gathered the information.
With telekinesis he could see mechanical energy itself and not just it's effect on matter. Pyrokinesis allowed him see heat and thermal energy. Biomancy allowed him not only to see the bioelectricity in humans but the electricity in machines.
His mother was naturally worried as this was a cognitive disorder and could be a sign of mental illness, and for a psyker this could prove impossibly dangerous. The Rune Priest(who the boy sees as his "Iron Father") was also fearful.
When diagnosis showed that Machina was sane, just a bit emotionally troubled(being a social outcat has this kind of an effect on people), the fears were some what deminished. The mother taught him to how to use telepathy on certain parts of his central nervous system so that he could control this synesthesia and then did what she could to adress his troubled soul.
His "Iron Father" (the Rune Priest) on the other hand believed that this was a gift from the omnissiah and a sign of his divine approval.
Six months after his fourteenth birthday he was Machina was surrendered to a ship of the black fleet. At at this point the effects of his training and enginneering show more than ever. He was tall, broad shouldered, and had the strong sharp features that the Imperium loved so much. The training that the his from his guardsmen tutor (one of his grandfather's subordinates) had given him a strong and fierce appearance. His long hair and electoos and pissed of face gave him the look of a bad boy(later it would prove to be his first source of popularity). His mother's training and instruction coupled with his pained, angry, and intelligent mind resulted in him having a fierce and ominous aura.
He was found strong enough of will and character to be admitted to the scholastica psykana to be trained in the ways of a sanctioned imperial psyker. Due to his mothers previous training and instruction he excelled through the classes and because of his appearance he enjoyed his first and arguably only period of popularity in his life. Machina found his first love interest, and with her had his first time. Both were separated by the scholastica when they were assigned to different positions after graduation. For years he worried that she was sacrificed. (I don't know what too make out her yet)
After his training at the scholastica psykana was complete the next stage of the project began as he was sent to Mars to become a tech-priest. Once he arrived Machina was reunited with with his psker mother and Iron father. The two had met him before Machina entered the priesthood of Mars to give him the last of the mechanicus implants. Given that the psyker mother was of the scholarly profession in the wh40k setting her skill with technology is comparable to that of a tech-priest and therefore was capable of assisting the tech-priest in designing the last of the implants.
When Machina was surrendered to the black fleet and sent to the scholastica psykana he possessed both an electro-graft and electoos, meaning that he had two of the six implants necessary to be an adept.
The designs of the implants are sleek and combined with each other in a few instances. He has several electoos and one of them functions as the electro-graft, and the potentia coil is as tradition dictates intergrated with the cyber-mantle.
The current design of Machina Psykana is more man than machine, the exact opposite of what he was originally meant to be. His body is covered in a network of stylized electoos, one of which is his electro-graft. His cyber-mantle is made of a flexible plastic metal composition that cover his pecks, shoulders and shoulder blades, and the lower ribs. The respirator unit was merged with a segmented helm/mask that retracts into the cyber-mantle. The potentia-coil is a combination of a crystal stack affiar and artificial tissue. The cranial circuitry is kept to a minimum and exist in the bone of the skull and barely touches the brain and a great deal of it was integrated into his crown like psychic hood. The electoo indicters, electro-graft, cyber-mantle, and respirator unit and helm mask were made design by the Rune Priest and Enginseer that worked on the project and tutored Machina as a child. The potentia-coil was a collaborative effort of the collaborative effort between the psyker mother and Genetor. The crown like psychic hood and crainial circuitry were made by Machina as replacements of the less advanced ones that he recieved earlier.
The psychic hood appears to be a circlet made of a lattice golden bronze sunken in to his and taken a the greater portion of his forehead. In the center of the hood is a small black pearl. This small dark and iridescent gem acts as one of his psi-foci, the others being some of the extra electoo inductors. The bands of metal that make up the exterior of the "crow" bare runes, sigils, and wards.
While enrolled at the university of Mars, Machina's education and training were made evident again as he quickly rose through the ranks of the mechanicus. Unfortunately, Machina came to a realization. Although his psychic synesthesia allowed him to perceive what others would believe to be a machine spirit, Machina did not see anything spiritual with in any of the machines the mechanicus produced.
When he revealed this to the Rune Priest that was His Iron Father, Machina was told to keep this secret as to tell others would be tech heresy, and the went into fury and abandoned him, leaving Machina with that small bit of advice and many curses.
Sometime later Machina was fully initiated in to the Priesthood of Mars, although he was still socially isolated due to his nature and even more so do to his personality. This is when he was approached by Inquisitor.
This Inquisitor had kept an eye on Machina since he was taken aboard the one of the black ships out of curiosity. The concept of a psychic tech-priest was never spoken of, and to see that one was in the making was was something of both shock and intrigue. Psykers and tech-priest were dangerous entities, even when they were useful. This was something to keep under surveillance. The inquisitor charged his contacts with reporting back to him about Machina's actions and development. One of the Inqusitors spy recorded Machina's confession to the Rune Priest who was responsible for his existence. Now was the the Inquisitors opportunity.
The Inquisitor chose now as the time to recruit the Machina into the Orders of the Inquisition. This was person who had been given a great deal of talent,skill, power, and doubt and grief. He had to be watched,and what better way to do so than to keep him under the heel of his boot and surrounded by people that could terminate him. Machina could also prove useful to the Inquisition for the same reasons that he was dangerous. Machina was now a young man in his mid twenties who had been cause a great deal of pain and frustration due to him being a vat breed void born psyker who had been destined to be come a tech-priest, and that coupled with the fact that he had now been forsaken by his father figure and had no idea if his mother or his lover or any of his mentors where still alive had resulted in quite a dangerous yet moldable mind set.
The Inqusitor saw that he could manipulate Machina in to willfully serving and dying in the name of the Emperor, but he had to do so now or else Machina might fall under the influence of the Imperium's many enemies( Machina's divination was that a purposeless mind wanders dark places and the side effect of his sanctioning were the unlovely memories which results in him involunteily twitching or remembering pain when Holy Terra is mentioned).
The Inquisitor gave Machina an ultimatum; Join the inquisition now and willingly and serve the chance of being rewarded,join and be under intense scrutiny, or be executed then and there and be forgotten. Machina chose to join willingly, and made another decision as well; he renamed himself as Almarus(derived from Alma, from Fear fame) Mathis Draconis.
From then on Machina served the Inquisition well, as it was the only place within the Imperium where he managed to thrive. The orders turned his life around and gave him purpose. Machina went from a pained youth to strong willed and competent Inqusitor in his one right who served with his all. Sadly this was not to last forever.
During his years of service he garnered a great deal of suspicion from other inquisitors that he ignored and dismissed due to the way his life had shaped his character.

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=Elite-Pirate Dec 7, 2011  Student Writer
I'll get to this as soon as I can. Not sure what exactly you want me to say about it anymore.
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Nothing really. Its just that I found something that reminded me that I wanted to show you something and never got around to it. That thing I posted was an imcomplete brainstroming session I did on my littles brothers I pad that took forever to get to my computer. When I have a more complete idea of what I'm gonna do with this I would like to show this to you so can ask for a few ways not to make it seem like a Matt Ward story.

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